The Syringe Murders Comments
This poem has a point,
That is honed at it's end.
For murder is most foul,
So let us not pretend.
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Spellbinding write. Each and every stanza stands out. Grips the reader from the very title to the last line of the poem. Masterfully crafted Onto my Poem List.
Thank you again Rose Marie for another kind and simply wonderful comment. You know how I like to write, to put a surprise or two in the last stanza and as your good self spotted the last line. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I thank you again Rose Marie.
A well constructed poem that stated the evil an ailment of life. It is so sad that we have to go through such miseries and brutal phenomena in the world. I love such academic and informative poems. Thanks for sharing. +++10.
Chan Mongol you honour me again sir. Thank you for your wonderful and kind comment. I'm glad that a gifted poet as your good self enjoyed it. And I thank you again.
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7/27/2025 8:42:52 PM # 1.0.0
A dark and gripping poem. I can only imagine that this is how some kids feel when they get their jabs at school. Superbly crafted- 10.
Thank you for your generous comment Bryony. And those school jabs were dished out by the smiling angel of death! ! And I just put up another dark one called Jack The Ripper Returns. Enjoy and thanks again. Take care.