The Synthetic Life And My Circus! Comments

What a brilliant synthesis and amalgamation of philosophy and scence fiction here! I feel I just finished watching a movie on science fiction where all the impossible become possible! The way you have ended the poem couldn't have been better any other way! Truly entertaining and truly enlightening!

Your poem makes one think deep. Great write. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

Its great........., wel written.............., It was pleasure to read..............

wowwww you are erudite a perfect mingle of Science and Religion.... now with the creation of life in the lab, I bet you will say-Where is God? Did God make man? But you and I know the truth? Leave Science in the labs and we will stick to our roots, our morals our culture lovely write dear Amritjee surely a tenner from me

Nice to read this poem on one of the most worrying developments in science. Well written. In between the original, funny ideas, the reader can feel the big worry for disaster. Good work.

The lines are encouraging based on science adorned with rhymes. I may consider this as an intellectual form of expression. At the same time it is business like and with humor. Yes sir, I have read about Craig Venter's invention of synthetic protein and blogged it in the internet titled 'One step closer to God.'

IN your urge and desire to express your scientific expressions please dont lose your poetic beauty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A scientific poem written with enjoyable humor.. science is moving toward...and -in some cases- beyond nature's law...I suppose we'll just have to wait and see who comes out the winner[ science or nature] a poem to ponder.

this is very interesting for me because I am a 3rd year BS Information Technology college student... nice poem here... this is really interesting!

You actually spoke a lot of serious sense in that humour We did it with vegetables and now we are doing it with humans We are trying to uproot the rules of nature.......without actually understanding the catastrophic effects Your poems makes one think.......you have a great art with you

The Discovery is no doubt great and can change the world. But whether or not the scientists will be finally able to make humans or monkeys, nobody an stop the imagination of a poet like Amrit. Great poem explaining the discovery in a very lucid and funny way! Fantastic imagery. Keep it up...10+

A fabulous imagination to deal with such a scientific subject as the latest Breakthrough by J. Craig Venter Institute! And that too through a funny narration of the imaginary problems of a circus Businessman! Where do you get such novel ideas from! It's offbeat, I vote 10/10.