Friday, May 15, 2009

The Syncope Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can find the absolute
If you deny the relative,
But you can never abandon the absolute,
Without the denial of yourself.
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Marieta Maglas
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Michael Walkerjohn 21 November 2014

Aloha Marieta... Nice work! [absolute...abandon...relative...denial...relatively... seemingly....searching...continuously...Inside, of yourself...] This gathering of your thoughts within this write is exhilarating! Would I, Should I, Could I... maybe! Very good work... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 December 2009

‘You can find the absolute // If you deny the relative…’ A well known adage in different Poetic format…excellent... agree with Ms. Barbara Ms. Nivedita Ten+ UK

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Barbara Smith 20 November 2009

You can find the absolute If you deny the relative, 10+

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Gwenda Madison 18 November 2009

Strong words. Great poem. 10

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Nolan Trenton 16 November 2009

Meaningful expressions 10

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

nice poem...good job 10

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loved I shall never find Lord grant me dereliction

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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