Tuesday, August 16, 2016

The Synchronized Heart Beats Comments

Rating: 5.0

He spread the red roses petals in his bed
He lit the candles
He placed two wine glasses by the bedside
He Switched on the radio-the music was soothing
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Rose Kanana
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Eliza Mwendwa 16 September 2016

I was flowing with the poem, I identified with the man, only to realize he was day dreaming? Nice peace

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

hehehe day dreamers create suspense

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Nancy Majau 01 September 2016

Wao! i like the flow...but the suspense was louder than words

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

sure it must have been

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2016

The fragrance of love! Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

Thanks for comment Louis

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James Mwenda 24 August 2016

Can we synchronize our heartbeats Rose? that would be awesome....well written peace.

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Charity Karimi 24 August 2016

What a suspense you have created greatly.love it.

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Collins Waswa 23 August 2016

I like the flow....sounded very real Rose till the nurse woke up the doctor or clinical officer from the day dream.

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Rose Kanana 16 September 2016

At times we sleep and day dream...

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