He spread the red roses petals in his bed
He lit the candles
He placed two wine glasses by the bedside
He Switched on the radio-the music was soothing
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Wao! i like the flow...but the suspense was louder than words
Can we synchronize our heartbeats Rose? that would be awesome....well written peace.
I like the flow....sounded very real Rose till the nurse woke up the doctor or clinical officer from the day dream.
I was flowing with the poem, I identified with the man, only to realize he was day dreaming? Nice peace
hehehe day dreamers create suspense