Sunday, March 11, 2012

The Symphony Comments

Rating: 4.5

the world is the
sad symphony

the sound which touches the ears
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Kamal Lalwani
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Nishtha Datta 11 March 2012

dear poet, it is a very nice idea, and true that we are not aware of our surroundings any more...... which is the saddest part. people should realize and at least try to act responsible..... the poem is simple but worth reading, it has a perfect balanced lines which gives it a different and real sense....: -)

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Kamal Lalwani

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