Friday, February 23, 2007

The Sword Comments

Rating: 4.8

There was this plain, straight sword
In a glass case with others of its' ilk
But what made this one stand out
Were the many nicks along its' blade
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 05 September 2014

Swords the weapons of destruction of humans in wars and the poetry here on sword is beautiful.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 23 February 2007

Wonderful painting with words, Marilyn! Perfectly executed!

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David Taylor 23 February 2007

Dear Marilyn, The Poem like the sword is a cut above the rest. Enjoyed it, thank you. Love David

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alice sunderland 23 February 2007

a real beauty to read marilyn. al xx

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Danny Reynolds 23 February 2007

Marilyn, fear not. I spoke with the curator and he assures me it was a poet's sword, (Those nicks were merely notches, and very few were earned?) Danny

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Geoff Warden 23 February 2007

Like this, the structure is souund and paints a picture of a story of underdog recognition well done

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