Saturday, November 5, 2005

The Swirl Comments

Rating: 5.0

The swirl had turned in me a picture
Of me, When I stopped seeing me as me
Of me, crushing the fallen leaves
And enjoying the beauty of the crunch
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Jose Maret
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David Gerardino 06 November 2005

OK, i had to read your poem a few times, still a good poem.

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