The Swing Comments
I tied a swing on the Venus,
To go up to the east and the west,
Up to the east and then to the earth,
Up to the west and then to the earth.
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A highly imaginative poem full of poetic flair and beauty! A sure 10
The poetic imagination transcend the entrance of West reaching the Exit point of East..Little gangs of nymphs and elves, ...Angels, harpies, igigi and fairies, /All are busy with their work, /Here and there with serious faces..brilliant description of nature and activities of celestial bodies..Superbly penned..Loved reading your poem replete with images..! Congratulations..! !
Thank you for spending time on my thoughts.I value Your inspiring comments.
an interesting poem of strange going's on out of normal sight? ............well imagined write.
Bisy Untan, To swing through the heavens with planet Venus as one's tree branch.......such a delight to ponder! I enjoyed sharing this enticing experience through your painting of fine words. What fun I had! Kathy
Thanks a lot Kathy.Happy to know that you enjoyed my imaginative experience.
A view from so far up! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Great imagination. You have painted a beautiful picture of the sky and one cant help taking a flight deep into it. Enjoyed.10+++
Your imagination has taken flight on wings of wide span... like an eagle soaring up! Interesting write... Enjoyed reading this.... Bisy!
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7/21/2025 10:03:45 AM # 1.0.0
touches me - Souls rushed from the earth I saw, Tiny souls from exit down/// sole imaginative
Day dreams, sometimes, make mind colourful. Thank you.