* The Swine Flu Of Earth * Comments

Plenty of swines on this earth who are not pigs..love the gist of this poem we must pull our aims up to look after the planet+++++10... coincedence I have the flu for 2 weeks now caught it in Hongkong...maybe stir fry germs...regards

As told by Judy Meibach From: Judy Meibach (New York United States; Female; 49) To: Anjali Sinha Date Time: 6/8/2010 11: 58: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Swine Flu I liked the title of this piece - as I realize that the swine flu affects us here in the states as it has affected you down under - your correlation of us as swine was interesting - and the choices of words that you used was great.

Well expressed poem with strong and powerful words. Hope, everyone gets this message soon. Thanks

Obviously humanes have become swine's own emage. nice poem,

very contemporary it was a very good way to wake humans and alert them about what they are doing

Well put! Swine flu has human, pig and bird DNA segments from three continents. So the swine must have invented it! Worth a full score!

Superb...10 'Born to deface God’s grace.'....... Ultimate truth...all of us do it & justify it. Wish everyone gets this message before its too late.

wonderful poem, very pleasent to read.10++++

earth's lungs..trees...all four beautiful imaginations...man is inviting trouble...10

I read the poem late, but it was posted very timely I know.Enlightening and thought provoking. Very well done.

this is a great poem about epedemic and pollution. The miracle of the great mother earth is her ability to cope and transform and she has had inhospitable years of barreness and infertility. She has shaken and bled her molten core upon the surface as Pelee' and from her eruptions of temper the islands of paradise arose. Humans can do little to hurt the great mother of us all. After our kind others will come and so on. We are not the worst that has come and the great earth mother will only tolerate our insolence for awhile. We are killing ourselves and future generations and for that the earth mother cries. If you think of the few moments mankind has been here compared to the trillions of moments the earth has been here, we've done nothing to hurt mother earth.

Awesome..You are telling people what to do in a good way.10++++++++++++

9/10 for capitalizing and rendering an interesting view on the topical and Is he really worth his salt or God’s mind-boggling fault. 10++ for the masterful rendering and the brilliant closure i've read in ages. you get my vote too. Way to go, Gal!

Very much relevant & thoughtful poem..Thanks Anjali

Wow. This poem takes the stand. Written straight out and upfront. Says it to the point and then some! Good lines and great words, powerful piece of work. DC

The Human too has infested the hallowed frame of earth. are the words that present the true picture of the issue good write

Wow this is good. It sort of goes with what I wrote about in my poem Pollution/Environment. It's time we actually do something not just talk about it. Thanks for the thoughts. I give it a 10.

Its quite horrible to think about it.The last pandemic was in the 1917 era where 50 millions of world population perished.

You don't just write poems, You manufacture them. What can i give you other than a 10?

the stark reality of man and his ways, playing havoc with nature and its forces