Wednesday, May 27, 2009

The Swelling Comments

Rating: 5.0

And if my long kiss could burn your lips,
Then you would allow the lack of words
To be jammed between us,
As a swelling,
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Marieta Maglas
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Ivan Kodorkovski 20 November 2009

truly sweet and poetic. thanks for sharing 10

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Dierks Emerick 18 November 2009

nice poem i like it very much 10

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Richard Breslin 18 November 2009

Up into the sky, Up into the Heaven, In which, Only God can understand us. 10

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Nolan Trenton 16 November 2009

This is a very well crafted poem, with excellent prose throughout 10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 01 October 2009

ghostly wall between us.....lovely metaphors in this poem.

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To be united unto Him is a lifelong insult on partings...... divine.....

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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