Friday, November 24, 2017

The Sweetness Of A Fire..... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the sparkling eyes
Quivering soft lips
Dancing hairs
Shiny teethes
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M. Asim Nehal
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Unwritten Soul 15 December 2017

Wonderful description, and who said fire is not sweet...if not how come it can make things warmer..Asim, this is a sweet poem, get the heat but dont get burn haha..joking!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Sparkling eyes, shiny teeth and beautiful dancing hair give amazing perception. Flowing in visible emotion life crawls more with glowing love. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Seema Chowdhury 24 November 2017

A tender write, Nicely expressed.

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M. Asim Nehal

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