No sound was sweeter than you singing the song 'Mandy, '
Caressing, embracing tones,
In perfect pitch, we never felt alone,
Stable jockey with blond hair, blue eyes,
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Really a captivating narrative piece. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.
That last verse really hit home..... but the poem contains a great life lesson. Memories like these are really special. Well worth the read.....thanks for sharing Hazel.
I love those unique moments when everything will connect rightly, that feel of happy being to come out as a life memory. Grateful for such a beautiful share, thank you!
I live close to Newmarket and your chapter relating to horses reminded me of the thoroughbreds there.Great!
It's a nostalgic composition to relive some treasured moments, some lines are really timeless: ' We relished the fast pace, ' appreciable in all respects
great write hazel... a beautiful tribute to your friends...... also nice lines and i really appreciate it...
some sweet, some sour, a balanced poem. it could even be turned into a country song. it has a sort of compatible story line. your style is very different from mine. i always appreciate reading different views and styles. keep on writing.
Very good write. But can you think once whether you can change your style? A new poem demands to be different from the old ones. I know, you have that strength. Go on
Beautiful graceful lines filled with bitter sweet memories, great write. BB: O)
Beautiful tribute to your friends Hazel, some lovely and inspired lines.
story of the sweet past with full colors and contrast bring heavenly hue in yours idyllic view that made our hearts serene, loving and composed........ Hazel...another grt composition from the past memories. sweet lines with great country music.......
Eternal light of d soul oh my yor freeverse wording is exquisite here. I so enjoyd yor superb muse here. I hope u like mine too.
A sweet poem dear poetess.... appreciated. Top score!