Sunday, April 14, 2013

The Sweetest Sound Comments

Rating: 4.8

No sound was sweeter than you singing the song 'Mandy, '
Caressing, embracing tones,
In perfect pitch, we never felt alone,
Stable jockey with blond hair, blue eyes,
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Hazel Durham
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2022

A sweet poem dear poetess.... appreciated. Top score!

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Chinedu Dike 15 December 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Really a captivating narrative piece. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.

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Mizzy ........ 27 August 2016

That last verse really hit home..... but the poem contains a great life lesson. Memories like these are really special. Well worth the read.....thanks for sharing Hazel.

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Elena Sandu 30 May 2013

I love those unique moments when everything will connect rightly, that feel of happy being to come out as a life memory. Grateful for such a beautiful share, thank you!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 May 2013

I live close to Newmarket and your chapter relating to horses reminded me of the thoroughbreds there.Great!

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Yasmin Khan 02 May 2013

It's a nostalgic composition to relive some treasured moments, some lines are really timeless: ' We relished the fast pace, ' appreciable in all respects

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 April 2013

great write hazel... a beautiful tribute to your friends...... also nice lines and i really appreciate it...

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Poet Of The River 25 April 2013

some sweet, some sour, a balanced poem. it could even be turned into a country song. it has a sort of compatible story line. your style is very different from mine. i always appreciate reading different views and styles. keep on writing.

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Vikrant Jog 21 April 2013

Truth flows.... I really appreciate this work

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Sayeed Abubakar 18 April 2013

Very good write. But can you think once whether you can change your style? A new poem demands to be different from the old ones. I know, you have that strength. Go on

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Paul Brookes 17 April 2013

Beautiful graceful lines filled with bitter sweet memories, great write. BB: O)

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Valerie Dohren 17 April 2013

Beautiful tribute to your friends Hazel, some lovely and inspired lines.

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Xelam Kan™ 17 April 2013

story of the sweet past with full colors and contrast bring heavenly hue in yours idyllic view that made our hearts serene, loving and composed........ Hazel...another grt composition from the past memories. sweet lines with great country music.......

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 April 2013

Eternal light of d soul oh my yor freeverse wording is exquisite here. I so enjoyd yor superb muse here. I hope u like mine too.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 16 April 2013

Good experience well written.

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