Saturday, November 15, 2008

The Sweetest Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the arrow of Cupid fires,
It is the pain of the departed that is sweetest!

My legs are numb, dizzy feeling of embracing my beloved,
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Rajesh Kumar Vaid
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

I am drunk, on Love! The wine cup of the God Himself! Rachel Ann Butler

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Amber Lamb 19 December 2008

Beautiful! What a lovely celebration.10 and more

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Yasser Koor 02 December 2008

oh oh oh it is really great poem it is nice and the imagination is great... i like it and i think ur poem deserve more than 10++++

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Reshma Ramesh 30 November 2008

what a great love poem..................well penned

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 27 November 2008

When the arrow of cupid fires And set whole human body afire, Same sordid world appears beautiful Same monotonus events showers joys plentiful. Good images and Good work

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 November 2008

Ammmmazing composition! finely penned! chosen words are beautiful! 10+++

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Rajesh Your wife must really treasure this ode to her. May your life together be truly blessed! Karin Anderson

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Ency Bearis 22 November 2008

a passionate poem..great piece...A10 Ency Bearis

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

'am drunk, on Love! The wine cup of the God Himself! Prosaic windows of my mind, Open inside, a glimpse of spirit ginseng'... love feelings lovingly expressed...good poem, Rajesh... gives a pleasing read 10

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Jay P. Narain 19 November 2008

Very nice poem. The first two lines struck me most. I know the pain.

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Hunter Dasten 17 November 2008

Your evocative and fascinating choice of words is what makes this poem shine. Write on my friend, write on!

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Anjali Sinha 17 November 2008

Hey Manjusha, lucky you Rajesh has written such a lovely poem for you, I AM BREATHLESS 'Breathless in the branches, of my lass! The moonlight in the garden, sprinkles silver …and Jasmine is offered, on her tresses, Oh touch is dissolution of my limits, sends shivers' hmmmmmmmm the fragrance of the jasmines lovelyyyyyy i luv vit. +++10 regards anju

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

I love this line the most ' It is the pain of the departed, that is sweetest! ' Brilliantly placed! Its dilluted the poem as a whole.Excellent writes Kumar!

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