When the arrow of Cupid fires,
It is the pain of the departed that is sweetest!
My legs are numb, dizzy feeling of embracing my beloved,
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oh oh oh it is really great poem it is nice and the imagination is great... i like it and i think ur poem deserve more than 10++++
When the arrow of cupid fires And set whole human body afire, Same sordid world appears beautiful Same monotonus events showers joys plentiful. Good images and Good work
Ammmmazing composition! finely penned! chosen words are beautiful! 10+++
Rajesh Your wife must really treasure this ode to her. May your life together be truly blessed! Karin Anderson
'am drunk, on Love! The wine cup of the God Himself! Prosaic windows of my mind, Open inside, a glimpse of spirit ginseng'... love feelings lovingly expressed...good poem, Rajesh... gives a pleasing read 10
Very nice poem. The first two lines struck me most. I know the pain.
Your evocative and fascinating choice of words is what makes this poem shine. Write on my friend, write on!
Hey Manjusha, lucky you Rajesh has written such a lovely poem for you, I AM BREATHLESS 'Breathless in the branches, of my lass! The moonlight in the garden, sprinkles silver …and Jasmine is offered, on her tresses, Oh touch is dissolution of my limits, sends shivers' hmmmmmmmm the fragrance of the jasmines lovelyyyyyy i luv vit. +++10 regards anju
I love this line the most ' It is the pain of the departed, that is sweetest! ' Brilliantly placed! Its dilluted the poem as a whole.Excellent writes Kumar!
I am drunk, on Love! The wine cup of the God Himself! Rachel Ann Butler