Thursday, March 1, 2012

The Sweetest Crime Comments

Rating: 5.0

After committing the forbidden act
Totally without remorse or conscience
She paused then licked the blade,
From back to edge
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Danny Draper
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Valsa George 30 August 2012

Oh how gory..... How eerie! ! Fantastic description cutting into the flesh! ! ! !

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Ruth Walters 22 August 2012

I thought the ending would be something like that, very good......

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Karen Sinclair 18 June 2012

Great piece dear danny bravo for your version of how it happened and a reminder of me the cheese thief as a child getting caught by my imprint minus the tooth id just lost... i thought my mum was a witch or genius to work out who it was.... bravo...

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Tanishia Denby 01 March 2012

i absolutely love this!

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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