Thursday, October 12, 2017

The Sweet Songs Of Love: 2-The Lily Comments

Rating: 4.6

The Owl kids hoot

In merriment high,
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Biswa Ranjan Nayak
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Jazib Kamalvi 22 September 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Biswa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Paresh Chakra 22 November 2018

Lures the bees, And the butterflies- Native and alien, From different corners Of her world.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 29 October 2018

I AGREE WITH YOU. I LIKE THIS POEM. I LIKE ALL YOUR POEMS. THANK YOU.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 20 January 2018

His touch of Deep passion, moonshine Wets the petals An invitation, sacred- Full of thirst for her. thanks biswa create thought your poem10+++++++

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Rajendra Rout 02 January 2018

The lily greets Her lover moon With her smiling petal lips.lovely poem shaired....10++++

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 December 2017

Waiting, for ages, over- For this moment Like the skylarks On the banks of river.thanks for sharing biswa10(++++++++++

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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

what a beautiful poem shairing.i enjoy this poem......10++++

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Rajendra Rout 25 October 2017

biswaranjan i am very happy to read your poem and i enjoy your poem.thanks for shairing....10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Beauty of tenderness is there in Lily's love. Nature is graceful to her. This flower greets lover moon beautifully. The rising moon ascends high and this is reflected in river. Moonshine touches the petals gently. Very nice and brilliant natural imagery is drawn in this interesting poem. Nature's love is originated from God's love. We see Lily's face reflects love for God and petals sing for God adoring beauty of his wonderful creation....10

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