Sunday, August 2, 2020

The Sweet Fragment Of A Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

O in the sweet fragment of a strange dream,
I came across a most beautiful scene.
I glimpsed some houses by a moonlit stream.
They were so golden and marked as holy.
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Shaun Cronick 02 August 2020

Great sentiment expressed with heart and vigour. And your two closing lines Dominic are the icing on the poetry cake. A great read and one to reread over time. And also a ethereal choice of accompanying photo too, well light in it's foreground when the only light source is behind it. Looks like a Byzantine church to showcase your more than fine poem.10++ and many thanks.

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