Thursday, May 11, 2006

The Swan King Comments

Rating: 5.0

The chorus rings softly
His desire his dance
Towering up high
Within magical trance
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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson
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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2017

So well written song, thanks for sharing

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Alison Cassidy 07 July 2006

Lisa, You describe the thrill of the stage with obvious love and passion. From an aging ex-thespian, I applaud you. love, Alison XXX

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Leigh A. Hill 12 May 2006

wow! this is one of those picture poems that keeps painting with every line written. i can see the whole 'opera' in my head and the curtain falling. perfect. love starr

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Fly like a seagull Glide like a swan i liked these lines, i have protrayed seagulls as scavengers in one of my poems, hehe.

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Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

Northumberland, England
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