Friday, December 27, 2013

The Swan Comments

Rating: 5.0

In quiet moments, that's when I hear Him
Telling me He's arranging everything;
"The love you are longing for will find you -
A swan will come, then look beneath its wing"
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 11 March 2016

My Echo “Swan Song” I bought a goose at the butcher shop, I had them, the feet and the head, lop …..off. I lugged the goose home to my kitchen, and to my surprise the headless bird was itchin’ … under one of its pimply, plucked bird arms, …. which …. set off in my head all sorts of horrible alarms. An itching goose? ! How can it be? It is quite dead. And that’s when, from beneath its arm came a rose, quite red. Then a voice, booming loudly, quite close and stern ….. said to me “Will you humans there on Earth NEVER learn? Just now, not far away, alongside the wide and flowing river …. kneels a lady seeking love and passion, as is the current fashion. I did my best to help, but along came the butcher boy and set a’bashin’ … the poor, now-lifeless (almost) goose. Now the goose will surely be cooked, and next time the lady looks for love-assistance, I’ll be so, so ……over-looked! bri :)

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Mike Barrett 03 January 2014

Beautiful! IF you wish, check out my poem, The Bird and the Tree. Cheers!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 December 2013

your love poems are planted in the heart!

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Brian Johnston 28 December 2013

Mindful that shapes deceive and breezes die, still I grow, no longer just a watcher of clouds. I sing a primitive song of desire to the power that governs her gathering, And open my arms to embrace an answered prayer, the moisture of her breath. From Like A Farmer

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David Lessard 27 December 2013

Soft and feathery. Full of love's longing.

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