The Swallows' Spring Dance Comments

Very beautiful sweet and smart! Whose soul wouldn't become a bird to sing the colours of the spring after a long winter's gray and cold? Love this poem thank you for share, how can I give it more than ten?

May that swallows dance up in an azure sky to fledge your dreams in the longest day of spring, flutter its feathers wide in cold air to melt your agonies as snow and sing a song for you.. Excellent write... It's a wonderful poem...top marks 10++++