Friday, September 1, 2006

The Suspense Is Terrible, I Hope It Lasts*. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I would wait a lifetime to feel her touch, her touch,
it means to me so much, so much,
The only one with more patience than me,
must be a doctors‘ surgery.
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Esther Leclerc 02 September 2006

Enjoyed this throughout and just love the last line as it's one that I like to say as well. Or sing, as the spirit moves! Nice use of repetition. This is just-right sweet and more. Well done and welcome to Poem Hunter!

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