Thursday, February 20, 2014

The Survivors... Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the kites picks up the momentum,
Its sublimed thoughts are in two different stratums,
The realistic crystalline omission, the vapor in delirium,
The kite picks up the momentum to stardom of kingdom,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 February 2014

Racing to the distant destination, , , nice poem...10 yes destination unknown

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Ramdas Bhandarkar 21 February 2014

Wonderful flight to end all fights, both internal and external. Namaste with Thanks.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 20 February 2014

you have woven a great insight with the metaphor of the flying kite.

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