Thursday, June 9, 2011

The Survivor Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw them running ahead of me,
But I could not overtake them,
they jeered at me from a distance,
But I could not ignore them...
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Nidhi Dev
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 June 2011

First of all I would like to thank you for commenting on my poem. Now about 'The Survivor', this was really great. Life is full of challenges and he who moves ahead with steady and calm persistency without showing any haste, gets his destination. He is the real survivor but sometimes success turns out to be a mere illusion. And from here begins the ordeal of fate. I loved the way you composed the poem. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing.

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