The Survivor Comments

First of all I would like to thank you for commenting on my poem. Now about 'The Survivor', this was really great. Life is full of challenges and he who moves ahead with steady and calm persistency without showing any haste, gets his destination. He is the real survivor but sometimes success turns out to be a mere illusion. And from here begins the ordeal of fate. I loved the way you composed the poem. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing.