Sunday, November 25, 2012

The Surprise Comments

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It was my Birthday, and I was in my room
Suddenly there came a sound 'BOOM'
The lights went off and the flower of fear in my heart bloomed
'You are afraid of the dark'I heard my mind bark
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NITHEESH ANNADANAM
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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 December 2012

A good surprise on your birthday! But they shouldn't have scared you so much! A good rendition of the incident in the form of poetry.Keep writing but not at the cost of your studies.

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NITHEESH ANNADANAM

NITHEESH ANNADANAM

CHENNAI, INDIA
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