Wednesday, November 30, 2022

The Surgery Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Tis a modern surgery
But the waiting room
Chairs are sad
With the tiredness
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David Wood
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Bri Edwards 03 December 2022

drip, drip! ? In U.S. I'll say tick, tick : ) bri As in my previous comment, I feel this 'Surgery' means a doctor's office, NOT a place where medical operations/surgeries are performed (usually) . bri

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David Wood 03 December 2022

Yes, tick, tick is what you'd say in America, but as a poetical expression I was thinking of Salvador Dali's Melting Clocks and 'tip' seemed to drip, drip like a dripping tap. Poetry is another art form just as the impressionist artists were like Dali.

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Bri Edwards 03 December 2022

ALERT: In the U.K. 'surgery' often has 'the meaning of the place where a GP works. In Australia and New Zealand, the place where a GP works is more often called a ‘Medical Centre' or ‘Clinic' or even just ‘Doctors'.' [ G.P. = general practitioner doctor ]

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David Wood 03 December 2022

Yes, there are many terms to use to 'see the doctor'. I chose surgery as my medical centre carries out a wide variety of non invasive tests and treatments.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 December 2022

David, you've perfectly summed up the hospital atmosphere. However, last year I had surgery for the very first time...and I feel like a totally new person. I'll take that totally dismal atmosphere any day for a new lease on life!

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Nabakishore Dash 01 December 2022

True picture of surgery room.I really dislike and try my best to avoid visiting hospital because of the boring waiting.Nicely written poem really.

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M.J. Lemon 01 December 2022

Powerful words....because as you go from one to the the next, you creep closer to truth.

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I have undergone a surgery just two months back. As Nosheen has said, Hospital is a sad place in itself. I never like to visit one. Nice poem. Poignant, but good. Top score

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Nosheen Irfan 01 December 2022

A hospital visit is terribly boring. And the wait makes it even worse. A sore reality. The place that is supposed to make you well is actually dismal. Well penned.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 30 November 2022

Great poem. I love the line about them liking you so much they want you to come back.

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Anjandev Roy 30 November 2022

Relevant piece.....like it....thank u, dear friend....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 November 2022

David this is a very powerful poem Bravo Top 5

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2022

I can sense the drip.drp.drip sound of the clock.

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