Saturday, November 12, 2016

The Surf Comments

Rating: ★5.0

yells at my drunkenness
beating in rhythm
at my ankles
attempting to bury
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rich soos
anger hair
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Mj Lemon 15 November 2016

O yes, the surf. I can feel it now. I remember it well. I also remember that feeling of control, and finding out that was an illusion. You brought back memories. This is an amazing poem.

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R Soos 15 November 2016

Will be heading back to the beach in 2017 - will test out my illusionary control after almost 40 years =: -) Thanks for you kind comments!

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James Mclain 13 November 2016

Welcome to poem hunter My friend.. iip

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R Soos 13 November 2016

Thank you for helping me feel welcome! Glad to be here =: -)

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rich soos

Passaic, NJ USA
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Passaic, NJ USA
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