Thursday, January 26, 2012

The Sunshine Within Comments

Rating: 4.4

On bleak days, with leaden skies,
when you don't know where to begin.
Your head hurts and your heart cries,
look for the sunshine within.
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Jojoba Mansell
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Chinedu Dike 05 June 2015

Powerful and inspiration piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with lovely rhyme scheme. If ones faith cannot endure, one cannot endure. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 26 March 2015

Hope and perseverance. Thanks for sharing

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Marketa Richnavska 17 April 2014

stunningly beautiful, thank you for such a poem...

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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 March 2014

Thanks for sharing this poem; just appropriate for today with leaden skies and water logged roads...congrats on being poem of the day...

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Stephen W 26 March 2014

Very fine indeed. Nice rhyme and rhythm, combined with clarity of expression. Bravo!

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Valerie Dohren 26 March 2013

Excellent write, expressing a great philosophy of hope.

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Savita Tyagi 26 March 2013

Lovely poem. We need to stay in touch with our sunshine within. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 March 2013

You have the sunshine within. thanks.

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Leslie Philibert 26 March 2013

Like the message, good write

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Jayne Davies 26 March 2013

A lovely poem! Well done! x

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Jayne Davies 26 March 2013

A lovely poem! Well done! x

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Jayne Davies 26 March 2013

A lovely poem! Well done! x

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Ruth Walters 27 March 2012

I love this poem. I've been feeling anxious of late and it made me feel better about things. You have a gift.

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Kevin Halls 27 March 2012

A message of hope flows through this wonderful poem, in other words don't give up. We've all had hard times and bad days, but we get through it eventually. Great poem!

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Besa Dede 26 March 2012

A great poem, and even so the message it conveys! Should you read mine Memento, I'd appreciate a review. ~Besa

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pagode Kim 26 March 2012

A wunderful poem... thank you for the message!

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Nims-sunshine Princess 26 March 2012

Nice poem... ^^ with a positive msg_ there is always a sunshine within..no matter how much is rainy surround

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 26 March 2012

Nice poem.....look for the sunshine in you. Good work....+

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Dave Walker 26 January 2012

A great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.

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Carsten Thomsen 26 January 2012

nice positive poem. Ill (try and) keep it in mind on a rainy day + You make great end rhymes without selling out on the flow / feel of the poem Good Job

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