On bleak days, with leaden skies,
when you don't know where to begin.
Your head hurts and your heart cries,
look for the sunshine within.
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Thanks for sharing this poem; just appropriate for today with leaden skies and water logged roads...congrats on being poem of the day...
Very fine indeed. Nice rhyme and rhythm, combined with clarity of expression. Bravo!
Lovely poem. We need to stay in touch with our sunshine within. Thanks for sharing.
I love this poem. I've been feeling anxious of late and it made me feel better about things. You have a gift.
A message of hope flows through this wonderful poem, in other words don't give up. We've all had hard times and bad days, but we get through it eventually. Great poem!
A great poem, and even so the message it conveys! Should you read mine Memento, I'd appreciate a review. ~Besa
Nice poem... ^^ with a positive msg_ there is always a sunshine within..no matter how much is rainy surround
Nice poem.....look for the sunshine in you. Good work....+
A great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.
nice positive poem. Ill (try and) keep it in mind on a rainy day + You make great end rhymes without selling out on the flow / feel of the poem Good Job
Powerful and inspiration piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with lovely rhyme scheme. If ones faith cannot endure, one cannot endure. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.