- The Sunshine Of My Life (Etheree) Comments

All the words gel together like sunshine seasons enveloping love with the warmth of sunshine, a poem that does not come all that easy with this excellent standard Ben ++++10+ regards

it flows like satin...

dear ben, i know exactly the feeling of this poem.great write, and i really enjoyed the warmth seeping in with closed eyes and day dreaming......sometimes i wish there was more time to stand and stare at natures unblemished beauty..this goes down as my favourite..thanks. ritty

love your satin dreams floating in your cotton fields ...................................... marvelous lines, Ben..so deserving for publication. I really admire your works, Sir.. Shalom. Meggie

I applaude the beauty and flow of this marvelous piece. It deserved to be published.10.

took me home to the Caribbean.. when i used to lay on the grass with my dogs.. a fantastic piece