Tuesday, August 26, 2008

The Sunshine Monster Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the sun peeps through the curtains
And the kids come out to play,
You'll find me in my bedroom
So the monster stays away.
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Ellie Sutton
COMMENTS
Tom Balch 01 September 2008

What a fantastic piece, keep the pen going regards Tom

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Emily Oldham 30 August 2008

Very funny! I love this poem. Thanks, Athena :)

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David Threadgold 26 August 2008

a very similar style to some of my own. a well written verse which flows well, keep up the good work as you clearly enjoy what you write.

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