Wednesday, October 29, 2014

The Sunshine Comments

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The stars twinkle afar
Dancing in the iridescent night sky
And in the presence of shimmering stars
The horizon looks darker
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

Star twinkles afar with dancing and I see you shining like an eternal sunshine. Very beautiful poem composed.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines..... So in closing my eyes I see you shining Like an eternal sunshine Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur 30 October 2014

A beautiful description of a starry night, comforting the mind with peace. You are faith You are hope You are my breath and my heaven You give me peace sublime .... very nice

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 October 2014

lovely write Deepak, soothes the soul.

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Salini Nair 30 October 2014

eager to see the sunshine that miss in the shadows......................beautiful poem...like it

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Valsa George 30 October 2014

A world once golden now looks barren The skies once azure now looks leaden A lovely poem with beautiful description of the night sky and the regret of having lost the company of someone dear and the passionate longing to reinstate that presence! Enjoyed!

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Heather Wilkins 29 October 2014

you are sunshine so in closing my eyes you are eternal sunshine lovely

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Heather Wilkins 29 October 2014

you are sunshine so in closing my eyes you are eternal sunshine lovely

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