Wednesday, October 23, 2019

The Sunset Comments

Rating: 4.7

I watched intently
The setting sun's dying rays
Glistened off the hill.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Moments of the setting sun so beautifully captured here! .. Again with ever such moving feelings! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Robert Austin 13 November 2020

The sunset such a beautiful sight great write Rose...10+

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Bipasha D 01 September 2020

Beautiful imagery! I am someone who gets excited during a sunrise or sunset and every other day I take photos in my phone to keep those memories alive :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 April 2020

sun's dying rays Glistened off the hill. even in the death, the rays glisten and gives beauty to the hill and to you who observe it. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2019

A wonderful poem that drags me to read it again and again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2019

A wonderful poem with great imagery! I find enough pleasure in reading your poetry time and again! Stay always happy and blessed with a sparkling literary journey!

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Indira Renganathan 03 November 2019

A waning candle burns brighter before it flickers out...likewise the setting sun also has its beauty of brightness... indeed a good watch and write

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Shaun Cronick 01 November 2019

A beautifully written haiku that shines down on everyone who reads it. Thank you for writing and sharing this magical gem of light.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 October 2019

What Wordsworth saw a melting orange, a nice poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 October 2019

Muse of the Sun! ! ! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 25 October 2019

Fantastic..........Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2019

A great little work with fascinating imagery! Appreciated...10

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Sandra Feldman 24 October 2019

Your words carry us to the scene and we participate in the feeling. Only the great can do that!

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2019

I read Kostas' Now the sun can rise', and now yours, The Sunset, a Haiku that takes you to a sunset yon of the hill. Beautiful.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 October 2019

An amazing haiku, dear ate Rose......10+++

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 October 2019

Captivating imagery

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Kostas Lagos 24 October 2019

Really beautiful image RM!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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