The Sunset Comments

Valese, something went VERY wrong

Nice way to explain the sunset light....~

oh, you murderer. you were so sane when you were in third grade. something went wrong. very wrong.

have a nice view of the sunset... sit a while facing it, savor the change of colors, and feel what fades within you and without you

It is ok....but a word to the wise...if you want to write about a sunset....you have to really work to find things that have not been said or compare it to a person or event in a spectacular way. ....after saying all that you could improve some of mine if you like.... :)

This poem is okay...It's not the best though....But keep writing.