Friday, July 29, 2022

The Sun's Rays And The Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tree reaches out,
For the sun's lovely rays
And leans into them,
For their warmth.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Timber Koleden 18 June 2025

What a wonderfully expressed poem! Thank you so much for this vibrant piece! Love expressed in tender natural phenomena.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2023

Ever such deeply beautiful thoughts! .. Ever so heartwarming! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2023

This is so very beautiful and written with such beauty in heart! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2022

Most beautiful Love poem I ever read, now I am reading once again, I love this Love poem, created with metaphors. Magnificent great poem about True Love by the Great Poetess.

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Susan Williams 28 August 2022

your love for God's handiwork is so evident in the words of this poem---a billion stars

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

An amazing description so deeply felt! .. So beautifully pictured! .. Definitely, Definitely 5 Stars! ...++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 August 2022

The tree, like a devoted lover! .. Awaiting... For the suns warm embrace! ..

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Soran M. H 12 August 2022

There's always harmony deep inside Rose's poems, wisely she use the symbols and metaphors from the nature to give an extra value to her poetic texts, and they're really poignant with a high degree

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Soran M. H 12 August 2022

Like a devoted lover, The tree always waits In any weather, For the light of dawn. So eager to welcome sun's rays And feel their warm embrace.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 August 2022

A beautiful depiction of the warm love that nurtures and sustains life.5 stars.

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Love is so warm and blissful that every living being crave for it. Trees are not different, the love of the sun is so dear to them

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Indira Renganathan 02 August 2022

Everything in this world live with the sun's light and warmth only....no exception the tree...may be sun is God to humans and lover to the whole plant kingdom....lovely work

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2022

THREE: I like Love-poems tremendously, in any format with any theme/subject. Thank you so much for sharing this fantastic unique love-poem, dear great Poetess!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2022

TWO: Loveliest is this love poem, and so very touching. the devoted lover anxiously awaits his beloved, all night until dawn appears. This scintillating poem deserves more than 5 Stars, I give 10 Stars for this unique love poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 July 2022

ONE: Each reader reads a poem in his/her own way. What I mean with this? I think this is certainly a unique love poem. With longing, the beloved waits all night until the dawn has come at last.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 July 2022

Like a devoted lover, the tree absorbs all the joy...and all the pain. You've captured the true essence of love in this brilliant poem, Rose Marie!

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Sandra Feldman 31 July 2022

A most enchanting and golden poem, written with the Sun's own golden rays

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Sandra Feldman 31 July 2022

A beautifully set natural, Romance between trees and sun, the beaty and depth of which, is ever done. A, , most enchanting and soothing

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Nosheen Irfan 31 July 2022

Beautifully penned! A metaphorical depiction of true love.5 stars

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Nabakishore Dash 30 July 2022

exquisitely written Mam.The tree is the greatest and most devoted lover because their love, the tree knows, provides food and fodder for all of us since they are the first level of food chain.Enchanting expression.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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