The Sunrising Comments

This who we are, we surely will rise indeed! Inspiring

We shall stand tall amidst the sea of struggles Painting in hue, our troubles Amidst the ruins, we shall rise Above the pangs of death, we shall rise Breaking forth from the Iron gates- - - such a great determination in your words..... words are powerful and it moves the readers. you do it now dear poetess.. thank you for this poem. tony

We shall stand tall amidst the sea of struggles Painting in hue, our troubles Amidst the ruins, we shall rise Above the pangs of death, we shall rise Breaking forth from the Iron gates As the sun rises We shall rise above the chains of sorrows As songs of victory caress our soul Beloved, let us sleep now... For the sun shall rise at dawn tomorrow. Wow, nice stanzas. I loved it.10 for it. Subhas