Friday, January 3, 2003

The Sunlight On The Garden Comments

Rating: 4.0

The sunlight on the garden
Hardens and grows cold,
We cannot cage the minute
Within its nets of gold;
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Louis Macneice
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Chinedu Dike 30 April 2023

A well executed imaginative write.

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Nabakishore Dash. 30 September 2021

Superb rhyme with beautiful words.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

true profound poem, very impressive.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

Amazing to read how the poet has built up his poem, very deep and insightful poem. True gorgeous!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2021

A poignant, insightfuand touching poem,5 Stars full. Enjoyed reading this brilliant and deepest poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2021

Beautifully written. A magnificent piece of poetry. Timeless.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2021

Powerful poem adorned with great rhyme and superb imagery that takes a reader to the deep world of the Poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 September 2021

Powerful lines embellished with great rhyme and superb imagery that can transport a reader to his deep world. A poetic gem. Timeless piece of poetry.

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2021

Sky is for flying…. and soon we shall have no time for dancing…..marvelous expressions. In the race with time let's always remember our short stay.

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Todd Saukko 11 November 2019

Todd Saukko, Published poet. I like this poem, it's similar to the style I write, very clear and crisp.

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Ice is Nice 14 December 2018

Okay, that's cool but where is Knack 2?

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Douglas Scotney 14 February 2018

superbly-crafted art.

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Susan Williams 14 February 2018

Word by word, phrase by phrase, emotion by emotion, the master poet takes us deeper into his world. Extraordinary use of poetic skills in such a building toward a climax way.

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Seamus O Brian 14 February 2018

Deftly constructed rhyme which advances the power of the subject rather than distracting from it. A beautiful piece of writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 February 2018

When all is told! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 February 2018

A great imagination put into the exact words it deserved. 10

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Reese Ella Howard 17 October 2004

This poem gives me actual chills on a physical level. Why did the poet have to die so young? Was he one of those who are just too good for this world?

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