The sunlight on the garden
Hardens and grows cold,
We cannot cage the minute
Within its nets of gold;
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Amazing to read how the poet has built up his poem, very deep and insightful poem. True gorgeous!
A poignant, insightfuand touching poem,5 Stars full. Enjoyed reading this brilliant and deepest poem!
Beautifully written. A magnificent piece of poetry. Timeless.
Powerful poem adorned with great rhyme and superb imagery that takes a reader to the deep world of the Poet.
Powerful lines embellished with great rhyme and superb imagery that can transport a reader to his deep world. A poetic gem. Timeless piece of poetry.
Sky is for flying…. and soon we shall have no time for dancing…..marvelous expressions. In the race with time let's always remember our short stay.
Todd Saukko, Published poet. I like this poem, it's similar to the style I write, very clear and crisp.
Word by word, phrase by phrase, emotion by emotion, the master poet takes us deeper into his world. Extraordinary use of poetic skills in such a building toward a climax way.
Deftly constructed rhyme which advances the power of the subject rather than distracting from it. A beautiful piece of writing.
When all is told! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A great imagination put into the exact words it deserved. 10
This poem gives me actual chills on a physical level. Why did the poet have to die so young? Was he one of those who are just too good for this world?
A well executed imaginative write.