Sunday, January 26, 2014

The Sunflower And The Rose. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sunflower and rose, they dance to a rhythm that goes unforeseen by their clans men.
The sunflower and the rose, a love so strong yet must remain unspoken by law.
Should such love ever be discovered. it would be punished.
The sunflower and the rose, they dance in hopes they can spread seeds of their own.
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Gary Hembree
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Bri Edwards 07 February 2014

.........reminds unspoken ........... love broken by their laws. these preceding lines stymied me. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - and did you want to type: goes unforeseen by... well, could be true. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i found the poem very interesting. poor sunflower and rose! : ( thanks for sharing.......... :) bri

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Kanav Justa 30 January 2014

, , , lovely poem gary, , , , loved it, , ,

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Noreen Carden 27 January 2014

This is a very realistic poem.People judge and at the end of the day to love and be loved is the most important thing and whether others approve or not is neither here nor there its nobody's business. Love who you want to love indeed i totally agree.Well done Gary

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