The Sun Will Rise Comments

Keep it up Louis, You might be turning me religious.

Wonderdul piece! Nice doing!

A very meaningful title for this warm, optimistic write. Ten, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

Ya sun will rise but we can change few things. Liked the last line and last word to be specific.

a very spontaneous poem just like the song of an early bird...sweet and melodious...deep in joy

i'm pastign somehtign I worte of my sis's Susan Bagley photo for this.... 'Sunflowers from heaven brightly bloom Their beauty instantly take away my gloom They smile and in them I see God's face So that L can make it through earth's dying place For I see hope in living forever in God's glory And to me, flower and such tell his story Of beauty, love, and his desire to provide Of his going to prepare a home to eternally abide So though it may seem a slight human whim Flowers and his nature, take me closer to him....'