The Sun Will Come With You Comments
How I long to touch yr lips.
As the cool wind brush against my tears,
I sit on this bench counting the hours until you return
But it's useless to think you still yearn for me
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A beautiful poem of love so lovingly and tenderly expressed. Great imagery and wonderful poetic expressions. Top Marks!
Today this poem is ranked #55. Congratulations, LeeAnn
Revisited today. Just say, Love is like that.
Congratulations, LeeAnn. Within just two days of publishing, this poem finds a place among the top 100 member poems. I hope it would reach the topmost ranking within no time. Congratulations once again.
Beautiful song of love and longing. Exquisitely created, LeeAnn.5 *s
Brilliant. You have depicted the pain of long waiting for the warmth of love
Nice love poem, albeit a little sad in tone, Lee Ann. The sun wouldn't disappoint you
Very heart touching piece! Just brilliant. Touched me deeply. So overwhelming!
Hoping the sun will come with you........very optimistic..... enjoyed it.....
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8/2/2025 8:43:36 PM # 1.0.0
I sit on this bench counting the hours until you return But it's useless to think you still yearn for me As the memories of yr kiss overshadows my judgement....wonderful.