Monday, October 31, 2005

The Sun Shines Bright Through Azure Skies Comments

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The sun shines bright through azure skies,
Perpetually shedding his rays,
Even when into the dark he hies, —
All nights at length turn into days.
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David Mitchell
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David Mitchell 08 November 2005

Why did I forget to include the date of composition when I submitted this poem?

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Ernestine Northover 31 October 2005

This is a very lovely poem David, if flows so well, I think you need to respell 'hies' to 'hides', which I think it's supposed to be as it sort of spoils the reading. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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