Monday, April 6, 2020

The Sun Seems To Say -Ii Comments

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Time to set, I set,
Worrying for no morrow
Which, for sure would show
Up, whether I frown or fret,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2020

In spite of worries there is smile. It is real life. Stunning expression. Beautiful poem with lofty theme.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Thanks, it like getting the final gong of the judge.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 April 2020

Time to set, I set, Worrying for no morrow Which, for sure would show Up, whether I frown or fret, Look at my smile's glow. GREAT SIR I HAVE COMPOSED ON THE SUN MANY POEMS AS THE SUN I NEVER SET FOLLOW HIM OR ME AP JI

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

I've got the message PP, thanks for the comments.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2020

Worries! ! ! Waiting for the sun! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Yes, worries kill the beauty of life, you have got it right, dear poet.

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Harindhar Reddy 06 April 2020

Dear poetess, you painted life with a few words. I agree with you while knows is stored for us tomorrow. Well done

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Dear poetess, well, I can't blame anyone for reading Aniruddha as Aniruddhaa. What is important is: you liked the poem. Thanks so much dear poet.

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