The Sun Rises In The Eyes! Comments

Every night is followed by a BRIGHT MORNING and yes, as you said, the sun rises in the eyes, shifting the glow to dawn on skies! ! ! lovely work! ! ! Blessings :)

Beautiful lines although all lines are marvelled but the last line so fantastically you compose sis can't tell the sun rises in the eyes , shifting the glow to dawn on skies! 10

A beautiful description of the gradual transition of a twilight evening to the glow of dawn! The sun rising in the eyes and shifting its glow to the dawn has wider poetic dimensions! A great write Shahzia! !

The poem brings hope alive. Night is associated with everything negative and the dawn with everything positive. A beautiful penning. Happy writing.

Yes the sun rises in the eyes when the love is in heart

xlent beautiful write. i admire your imaginatiion n writing power. amazing write

xlent beautiful write. i admire your imaginatiion n writing power. amazing write

xlent beautiful write. i admire your imaginatiion n writing power. amazing write

the sun rises in the eyes shifting the glow to dawn on skies! As Heather Wilkins pointed out, the last two lines is a masterly rendering. Beautiful.

a good write Shahzia the sun rises in the eyes shifting the glow to dawn on skies.