Monday, August 10, 2020

The Sun Of My Words Comments

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Shaun Cronick 16 August 2020

And Dominic yours is so neat, with a great message for one and all. A most well presented and uplifting poem.

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Shaun Cronick 16 August 2020

Well I'd better rip that one up! You seem to have beaten me to the punch here Dominic. I wrote something similar a few scribbles/days ago but not as good, to be honest. Based on the phrase The Sum Of All My Words. And if I truly honest I couldn't get it to work, to beat or flow. A full score for getting yours to work Dominic and an inspiring metaphorical poem as well good sir. Take care.

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