Sunday, November 5, 2017

The Sun Never Minds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Extravagant source of light when it shines
Foolishly hoping what he touches all enshrines
Stones unmoved though warmly heated
Wax blocks have been melted!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 29 November 2017

A beautiful limerick............................................................

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Indira Renganathan 07 November 2017

His light touching all to get enshrined, warming the unmoving stones, melting the wax blocks innocent sun is dining on winter....lovely work on nature...is winter bidding bye bye there...interesting poem Akhtar

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

Insightful presentation. Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 November 2017

Looks like a naughty poem about the sun..................

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Nosheen Irfan 06 November 2017

Beautifully written. The sun is the ultimate source of life. Through the mists n clouds, it finds a way to shine.

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Rini Shibu 05 November 2017

Stones unmoved though warmly heated.. Though touched remains the same.. An insightful poem

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