Monday, May 12, 2008

The Sun - Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden Yellow fiery ball
pasted on the white wall
inspires everyone
forcing the darkness behind
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Deepti Agarwal
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the mom and dad for life, , lovely poem

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rohit sapra 24 May 2008

Sun and moon surely have their own significance and not one of them can be replaced by the other. So this poem is surely nice to read.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 May 2008

a delightful sunny poem...gives moon like cooling effect!

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Aashish Ameya 12 May 2008

very nice poem..i also wrote on the same...

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