Wake up
The sun is up
Open the window
Let the sunlight flow
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A sparkling poem and a wake-up call at the same time. Sunrise is too beautiful to miss.
This poem speaks about the joy of life. Brilliantly write, well crafted, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us. Chandan
A delightful little poem! ....See the light dancing on the wall...personification is at its best! Appreciated rhymes and rhythms! Loved reading this beautiful poem! Full marks (10/10)
Today is another new day and I have promises to come at the stage of every new leave as green life to love great 10+++
Loaded with life lessons and pregnant with positivity is this lovely poem!
Wonderfully written...gives the reader the hope of putting up with the past and carry on.... Be glad for another day of life To live and to love... 10++++++
See the light dancing on the wall Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow...........sun, energy, sun dancing....... such fine expressions of joy and warmth and a beautiful morning call. thank u dear poetess. tony
lovely poem on the sun heralding a brand new day! the magic of sun at dawn -captured in a few words!
an inspiring poem that celebrates not just being alive but also the birth of a brand new day..............well written Nudershada
Wow, fantastic poem. I read it in the morning and it really boosted my mood. Excellent!
An Ever So Beautifully Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Spirit And Flow! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow - Like sunshine, i feel the warmth between your lines. Thanks for sharing, Nudershada.
Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow Be energized be enthusiastic Today is another new day Yes every today is a new day and it has to be lived anew. Loved the theme dear Nudershada. Thanks for sharing. 10+++++++
It is an elegant piece of poetry! The rhythm and flow of the poem is fascinating! I liked the last three lines of your poem most! I vote this poem with a 10
Positive attitude to life with love and live.Nice poem.
Inspiring poem. Get up and start your day as sun is up....Thanks 10++