Tuesday, October 10, 2017

The Sun Is Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wake up
The sun is up
Open the window
Let the sunlight flow
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Nudershada Cabanes
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M Asim Nehal 10 September 2020

Inspiring poem. Get up and start your day as sun is up....Thanks 10++

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Michael Walker 24 November 2018

A sparkling poem and a wake-up call at the same time. Sunrise is too beautiful to miss.

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Chandan Dey 25 June 2018

This poem speaks about the joy of life. Brilliantly write, well crafted, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us. Chandan

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Robert Murray Smith 15 June 2018

A wonderful poem reread. Full of light.

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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 09 June 2018

Positive Poem Best Wishes For Poet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 June 2018

A delightful little poem! ....See the light dancing on the wall...personification is at its best! Appreciated rhymes and rhythms! Loved reading this beautiful poem! Full marks (10/10)

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Thank you Dr. Phillip for your wonderful comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 June 2018

Today is another new day and I have promises to come at the stage of every new leave as green life to love great 10+++

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Loaded with life lessons and pregnant with positivity is this lovely poem!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 18 May 2018

Wonderfully written...gives the reader the hope of putting up with the past and carry on.... Be glad for another day of life To live and to love... 10++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2018

See the light dancing on the wall Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow...........sun, energy, sun dancing....... such fine expressions of joy and warmth and a beautiful morning call. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Robert Murray Smith 15 April 2018

Such a positive poem that we can't but feel its glow.

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narayana aghalaya 28 March 2018

lovely poem on the sun heralding a brand new day! the magic of sun at dawn -captured in a few words!

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Tom Allport 26 March 2018

an inspiring poem that celebrates not just being alive but also the birth of a brand new day..............well written Nudershada

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Hans Vr 25 March 2018

Wow, fantastic poem. I read it in the morning and it really boosted my mood. Excellent!

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2018

An Ever So Beautifully Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Spirit And Flow! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Perdita Young 09 March 2018

Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow - Like sunshine, i feel the warmth between your lines. Thanks for sharing, Nudershada.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 March 2018

Feel its warmth touching you From your head down to your toes Bath in its radiance, bask in its glow Be energized be enthusiastic Today is another new day Yes every today is a new day and it has to be lived anew. Loved the theme dear Nudershada. Thanks for sharing. 10+++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2018

It is an elegant piece of poetry! The rhythm and flow of the poem is fascinating! I liked the last three lines of your poem most! I vote this poem with a 10

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Sumit Baswa 23 January 2018

Nice poem

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Binayakumar Mohanty 09 November 2017

Positive attitude to life with love and live.Nice poem.

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