He gives no pressure on us
No demand for prayers.
Never makes us nervous
He is the holy, virtuous.
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Sun is round like a zero, a wheel Life from zero to zero, as I feel. This zero is the undeniable source For conditions and life to enforce. great poem. imagination, creation, system of the sun, life recycles in cyclic turn. tony
The sun is zero The earth is zero The solar system is zero From zero the zeros took birth A dot is now disclosed as the living world
Excellent poem chosen for then second time. Twice chosen, best woven. Same date last year and today. Hooray! Such a greatest pleasure to read this treat, Chan as written here as a response by Sylvia Frances Chan CONGRATULATIONS for this honour, Chan! A 10 Full Score.
Esteemed poets have interpreted this brilliant poem in different dimensions but my poetic eyes just look that powerful luminous round! A great work! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being selected as Poem of the Day!
The equation Sun and the cycle of life on the planets including Earth logically formulated and nicely presented. I would like to quote: Within the system of the Sun Life recycles in cyclic turn.
Seasons and the life maker! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, Sun is zero and other planets are in numbers 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 and 9! That is why Arithmetical numbers are between 0 and 9!
Yes sir! That's what it is! I appreciate your enlightenment in this matter.
Magnifying the power of zero! Chan engages upon the whole life cycle, creation, and reincarnation, the recycling of the soul through the soil, through the earth, through the great zero. Making something great of zero- a real accomplishment.
Your review is also with full of enlightenment. I cordially thank you for the solidarity of yours.
'The truth can't be hide' This line jars as it should read The truth can't be hid. Then it doesn't rhyme.
You have the powerful observation. I thank you for your support. In poems, it is not easy to maintain grammar always. Hehehehe....Thank you Adrian Flett.
Sun is round like a zero, a wheel Life from zero to zero, as I feel. This zero is the undeniable source For conditions and life to enforce. - - - - - -What a beautiful poem about Sun- -the source of energy- - - the cause and sustainer of life . Congratulations for being selected Poet of the Day.
Dear poet Bharati Nayak, your inspirational comment is a big thing for me. I am glad that I could cater the poem for talented people like you. Thanks.
Beautiful poem. Sun is center of all life. Whatever powers that Sun powers us. Congratulations for a well written poem of the day.
In good old Sanskrit, it is NOMO JOVA KUSUM: SANG KASSO PIONG: MOHA DHUTING.... Thank you for your fine comment.
The genesis of life cycle kick started by the Sun, who is the creator, has been wonderfully unfolded. Well deserved poem of the Day. Heartiest Congratulations.
Dear poet, I thank you very much for your citation of Genesis. I appreciate your support for my words. Stay blessed!
Within the system of the Sun Life recycles in cyclic turn .Yes. The power and purpose of the sun is obvious. Congrats
Thank you so much for your attention. I attempted to bring up a little meaning of the wheel, the ASHOK CHOKRO. Your comment is very important for me.
The greatest creation for all source of energy. Sun is the brightest light.
Dear poet, your comment bears more lights beyond the mighty Sun. I hope to get capacities to reach there. And I am trying.
SUN us sun; without any demand He serves with great heart He doesn't need any prayer He doesn't need any worshiper from the ZERO He is mercy to everyone.....! ! /// wonderful expression
Dear sir, Your review is very powerful to empower. I appreciate your footsteps in my domain. But due to the fact that I became a legally blind man, I just couldn't return your favor and support for me. I zoom characters and notice that you are a noble reviewer. Please accept my humble appreciation for your excellent comments over and over. I will remain grateful.
Marvelous poem of the day, sir Chan. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++
Dear much regarded holy friend. Your kindness and politeness always give me joy to move on. Your attention to my words encourage and inspire me a lot. You are an enlightened man. Stay more blessed!
Yes, the cycle reminds me of reincarnation, where we have all been recycled. And from beginning to end is representative of traveling 360 degress (a zero) . I wrote a poem on this once. Congratulations on poem of the day. Great poem. : -)