Monday, June 19, 2023

The Sun In Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun has come out with its fierce brutality
With its shining armours to destroy the earth
It paces the sky with vomiting fire of revenge like
After a million years a monster has taken birth
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 June 2023

Very nice to read this awesome poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 21 June 2023

Summer is such....but God; s mercy, , we have summer rains too...nice poem

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So beautifully penned Anilji. Thank you so much for sharing this marvellous poem. Top marks + To my fav

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Rajan T Renganathan 20 June 2023

Well written. I enjoyed the heat.5*

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Nosheen Irfan 20 June 2023

Summer in the subcontinent can be ferocious. You have depicted the intensity of the heat very well. I can fully relate.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 20 June 2023

The Sun is very angry on us because of our misbehavior with nature! nice to read you

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Anjandev Roy 19 June 2023

Excellent and relevant work......thanks for sharing......

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The fury of sun… good

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