Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, August 24, 2012

The Sun In Sky Comments

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The world is fast asleep
Under the cover of darkness to keep
Control over kingdom and enlarge
Its influence on parts called very large
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Kar A Ghoun Khan Eloquent and filled with symbolism. Happy to read it. In my humble opinion it will take more than natural energy to step out of the dark and dwell in the light without any further need to retire.3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Some Girl A lovely write reminding us of the sun's place in the sky :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

If only we could make things better for the youth Edward Wilkes23 minutes ago Bravo Comment 1 Comment+1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

I like how your poem feels like a bedtime prayer. Positive and inspiring! Each day is a chance for a new beginning. +1 Great Job!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2012

Richard Smith28 minutes ago Great Job...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

The world is fast asleep Under the cover of darkness to keep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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