Tyrannical, horrible, traumatic, ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
That’s what, I’ll say-
Juvenescent childhood, as it flowed thro
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this is very touching and great poem inded..yeah a beautiful tribute, , ...thanks 10+++
A friend indeed is a friend indeed.... There is a destiny that makes us brothers in that no man should walk alone in that what we give to others shall return as our own Your tribute will return to you......fine poem++++10 regards uavanice1
a very beautiful and sincere tribute to a friend..sure he was happy about...10*****
a very beautiful and sincere tribute to a friend..sure he was happy about...10*****
Only he has see the solar eclipse with a moon to rise forever.
This good friend of yours is very fortunate to have the best friend on earth - You! Fabulous expression (as always) !
wow really superb poem...i can see the hard work on the poem to describe the sadness of your friend.he must be proud of you to have you as a friend and feel jelous bcoz i have not such friend....but nice words.a bit hard to understand but shows a great poetess.....
Great poem, with similarities to the great William Blake (Innocence/Experience) . & well done to your friend for overcoming such a traumatic childhood with great character.
Very nicely written and clearly give the pain one suffered in childwood. Almost all creatures in world suffer on one or other. My sincere tribute for yur friend for his grievous feelings during the childhood. Let yu write more and blessed all in your life.
great write yaar.. realy nice 1... ur frnd too mst b feelin gr8 2 read this... :)
each time i visit the orphange, i wish i wrapped them all in my warmth!
sun symbolizes strength, power...tho it stops shining at night but promise to shine the next day..HE is as strong as the sun, , , , am also proud of him...tho sacrifices poured unto his life but still, he stand still...that's the essence of a good man....hope to see him first on the line...hope that success may be with him always...as we go over the journey, dont lost hope, , , cheers naizz
a very mature write and justified dedication... I am happy to see that your pen is maturing... this poem deserves more than 10... thanks for sharing...
I love the passion; and love, in every word of this poem. Sooooooooo Beautifully done! ++++++10
A true expression of admiration of a close friend I'm sure he well be honoured with your words what a kind thing for you to do ....10+++ kind regards
A lucky person indeed, to have a lovely poem dedicated to him! -Raj Nandy
i think i commented on this touchig poem which i read till the end once again..very well written...10+++++