Friday, December 22, 2006

The Sun Ii Comments

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scauleded by the burning light of the sun,
covering charred pupils with my hands,
the flesh has disintegrated and now melted,
falls dripping in a puddle on the tile floor.
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Meghan
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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 March 2008

i love these lines meghan, covering charred pupils with my hands, the flesh has disintegrated and now melted, falls dripping in a puddle on the tile floor. however on the whole i think the poem is about environmental protection.

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