Friday, January 3, 2003

The Sun Has Burst The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.1

The sun has burst the sky
Because I love you
And the river its banks.
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Jenny Joseph
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 November 2021

A beautiful poem with compelling images.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2021

Congrats for being chosen twice as TMPOTD

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2021

Such a loveliest Modern Poem Of The Day by the great English Poetess Jenny Joseph 5 Stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

The sun has burst the sky because the poetess loves him! Greatest things are happening, because she loves him!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2021

Wonderous and loveliest occurrences beacuse the sun has burst the sky!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2021

This poem touches my heart, so amazingly created! 5 Stars full

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 August 2021

This is a marvelous poem on love having touching expression. Full stars.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 August 2021

A great poem of love so beautifully expressed. The recurring lines enhanced the beauty of this write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 August 2021

The sea laps the great rocks Because I love you, , , , , fantastic expression!

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M Asim Nehal 04 February 2021

The repetition 'Because I love you' enhanced the level of poem to a different level.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2021

Wonderful use of hyperbole!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2021

The black bird fills the air because..

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Ask Sun 03 February 2021

Because I love you... beautiful because I love you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021

f 'Warning', first published by Souvenir Press Ltd in 1997, has now been reprinted 41 times. WOW! 5 Stars for this TMPOTD. Such mesmerizing poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021

5 Stars for Jenny Joseph because I love her fantastic poems like 'Warning'. So exuberantly rendered!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2021

And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you.Yes, absolutely, when in love everything seems possible, true or not true, but because of the love at that moment, all things are fantastic and accepted. Congrat for the Modern Poem Of The Day! 5 tars

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Jannatul Merry 03 February 2021

The sea laps the great rocks Because I love you And takes no heed of the moon dragging it away And saying coldly 'Constancy is not for you'. The blackbird fills the air Because I love you

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Yiyan Han 01 December 2020

The people walk in the street and laugh I love you And far down the river ships sound their hooters Crazy with joy because I love you. - Envious actions are depicted.

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Gordon Walter 21 November 2020

Yes love can make anything happen.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 November 2020

When a heat is in love, the eyes see beauty all around, the ears hear a cuckoo's cooing from all directions. Congratulations on your poem being chosen as 'The Modern Poem Of The Day'!

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